Sonnet of Love

Deliciously abundant was the sweet tasting aroma of utter defeat
Thoust made her a stranger to love, respect and truth
For it lies deeply rooted in her decaying tooth
This will make survival hard for her to eat

For life is seductive with all of her charms
Pleading for more attention as if comparis to the sun
Thoust left her blinded add if the sun were the one
Self infliction is her choice of arms

Be not weary for their is reprieve for thou
When Weight is fiercely met with hesitation
Life teaches us to shift as a new lesson
Now wipe the sweat from your lovely brow

This is not the end of love my dear friend
It’s a new beginning for life, The End

For our last assignment in Writing we 01: Poetry we were to create a sonnet. Challenge accepted but not sure how well it was executed.

All feedback is welcomed.

Thank you in advance for reading. 😉

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  4 comments for “Sonnet of Love

  1. 10/21/2015 at 2:03 PM

    Thank you so much for the encouragement and for reading. And, yes, antique language is challenging, to say the least. 😉 Thank you again for dropping by. Have a wonderful week.


  2. 10/21/2015 at 2:01 PM

    The end of love is the start of life. A message as astute as it is true. And astutely expressed. Working with antique language is hard, isn’t it? I enjoyed reading the other work beside the notice of the sonnet. And I like the photos, though pardon me for liking the words more. Your choice of words is strong and thought-provoking. Thank you!


  3. 10/16/2015 at 2:52 PM



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