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Couched Love

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This is a scenario being played out in my head before I decide to answer a very simple question. Since my daughter always says that I over think things. She may have a point.

Is it intended for love or admiration

You withstand daily torture, for the pleasure of others.

Or are you enjoying the constant bombardment of the different and deafening perfumes coming from the spoils of others?

There are many secrets wrapped in your bosom of untapped tapestry.

Is this where love comes to die?

Is your name more literal than we, mere mortals, admit it to be?

Could it be so simple a notion, that love is chosen.

Or are we doomed to repeat the past of failed love?

Therefore, I respond to your question, “Do you want to sit down? ”

The only seat available is the love couch.

“No, thank you. I’ll stand. “

Author: Celeste 2015

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  78 comments for “Couched Love”

  1. Celeste SunDragonLady Burgess
    10/31/2016 at 6:37 PM

    Thank you Angel. 😉

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  2. Celeste SunDragonLady Burgess
    10/31/2016 at 6:35 PM

    Thank for commenting 😉

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  3. Celeste SunDragonLady Burgess
    10/31/2016 at 6:31 PM

    Yes, it can. Curve balls is right. 😉 and Thank you for stopping by

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  4. Celeste SunDragonLady Burgess
    10/31/2016 at 6:30 PM

    Awwww. Thank you for your kind words 😉

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  5. Celeste SunDragonLady Burgess
    10/31/2016 at 6:27 PM

    Thank you very much Andrea

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  6. Angel Berry
    04/24/2016 at 8:13 PM

    I do poetry too. Yours is impactful!

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  7. Ashleigh
    04/24/2016 at 3:42 PM

    Very, very nice – Thank you for sharing!!

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  8. Tescha Chetty
    04/23/2016 at 3:00 PM

    Great poem. Powerful words. Life can really throw curve balls at you. Thank you for sharing kindness:)

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  9. The Practical Saver
    04/23/2016 at 12:57 PM

    This is a lovely, strong poem. I may not have a blood in me to understand a poem, but I have to say that your writing skill is really good.

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  10. Celeste SunDragonLady Choi
    04/22/2016 at 11:54 PM

    So true. Bittersweet, but worth every bit of it. Thanks for commenting😉

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  11. Celeste SunDragonLady Choi
    04/22/2016 at 11:53 PM

    Lol. Thanks Dunja 👌

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  12. Celeste SunDragonLady Choi
    04/22/2016 at 11:52 PM

    Thank you for your encouraging words PJ😉👌😆

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  13. Celeste SunDragonLady Choi
    04/22/2016 at 11:51 PM

    Thank you Kathleen😆👌

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  14. Celeste SunDragonLady Choi
    04/22/2016 at 11:51 PM

    Anytime Cassandra👌😉

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  15. Celeste SunDragonLady Choi
    04/22/2016 at 11:50 PM

    Yes, she is my polar opposite. Leo and Capricorn. Two leaders… Lol.. joy😉. You’re correct, caring for others, sometimes, forces you to put yourself on the back burner. If we are not well, we cannot care for another. Thanks for your comment👌😆😉

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  16. Celeste SunDragonLady Choi
    04/22/2016 at 11:47 PM

    Hi Karl. I think they go hand in hand. But being, in love. That’s truly something to cherish😆👌

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  17. Celeste SunDragonLady Choi
    04/22/2016 at 11:45 PM

    Yes there is😉 thanks for stopping by

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  18. xotheurbancat
    04/22/2016 at 7:16 PM

    Bad experiences sometimes makes us not to risk on loving again. But those experiences makes us to be wiser and more mature.

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  19. Dunja
    04/22/2016 at 3:54 PM

    Such a lovely poem! It sure makes you think..

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  20. thezafragroup
    04/22/2016 at 3:49 PM

    Beautiful poem! Very creative yet powerful. I think it’s definitely important to not let the opinions or beliefs of other people affect you. You need to be you and do what makes you happy. Thanks for sharing this.

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  21. Kathleen
    04/22/2016 at 11:13 AM

    My uncle loves writing power and world love your site!

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  22. Cassandra
    04/22/2016 at 10:34 AM

    This poem is so amazing. Thanks for giving me a new perspective to consider!

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  23. bmobshelldrawer
    04/22/2016 at 2:26 AM

    I have 2 thoughts on it; 1. It is good that your daughter is different than your personality 2. caring for others is admirable, but don’t let it destroys you.

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  24. karlapitzen
    04/21/2016 at 10:26 PM

    I’ll have to start asking myself if what I am doing is out of love or for admiration. Sometimes the lines get blurred.

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  25. Celeste SunDragonLady Choi
    04/21/2016 at 6:43 PM

    Thanks a bunch Kerry. You just brought a different perspective to it for me. I didn’t see it as being powerful to stand. But, I can now see it. Thank you tremendously 😉

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  26. Celeste SunDragonLady Choi
    04/21/2016 at 6:41 PM

    That is so true Anamika. Communication is the key to all things. Including with ourselves. 😉 Thank you for your comment 😉

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  27. Celeste SunDragonLady Choi
    04/21/2016 at 6:39 PM

    Thank you Denisa 😉

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  28. Reporter On The Road
    04/21/2016 at 1:31 PM

    This poem is very powerful! A strong message with a lot of hope. I believe there is always a light at the end of the tunnel… 🙂

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  29. Kerry O'Byrne
    04/21/2016 at 1:25 PM

    Brilliant poetry! I’m quite young and on the couch, but having the power to stand is admirable. Thanks for sharing 🙂

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  30. Anamika Ojha
    04/21/2016 at 11:55 AM

    Beautiful Poem! I totally agree that most of the relationship in this world dies without proper communication!

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  31. Denisa
    04/21/2016 at 11:33 AM

    I love your poetry and this especially because is so powerful and emotional at the same time !

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  32. Celeste SunDragonLady Choi
    04/21/2016 at 11:08 AM

    I agree so much Eloise. I have also experience divorce and that is where some of those familiar emotions probably came from. However, there is light at the end of the tunnel. Love does shine again, but avoid that couch. 😉 Thanks a ton for reading and your thoughts.

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  33. Eloise
    04/21/2016 at 10:47 AM

    I love poetry, it’s such a beautiful way to express emotions… Love is one of the most powerful emotions in human beings, it can cause so much joy and pain in ones life. Your poem hits home for me! my love has died on the couch, so to speak… I’m in the middle of a divorce, hopefully in the future, love will be found in my life again, with the right one!

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  34. SunDragonLady Choi
    04/21/2016 at 9:14 AM

    Thank you for stopping by. Yes, it can be bittersweet at times. 😉

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  35. Laura Hartley (@WhatsHotBlog)
    04/21/2016 at 8:37 AM

    This really made me think and didn’t end up where I expected it to! I think love is chosen for us, which can sometimes suck, but sometimes be beautiful 🙂

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  36. Liz Mays
    04/21/2016 at 7:06 AM

    I stink at interpreting poems, and I suspect that everyone has their own take on meanings, but this is lovely and it did get me thinking. I enjoyed it.

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  37. SunDragonLady Choi
    04/20/2016 at 8:04 PM

    Thanks a ton ‘pink’ for your kind words. Truly appreciated

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  38. SunDragonLady Choi
    04/20/2016 at 7:50 PM

    Thank you very much for your awesome comment. 😉

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  39. tp keane
    04/20/2016 at 7:16 PM

    I love it. too often relationships die because of lack of interaction. Yes, they do come to die on the couch. Brava.

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  40. SunDragonLady Choi
    04/20/2016 at 6:03 PM

    Thanks Ana. I am glad I am not the only one who thought that question was boggling. But, you are correct, love is not chosen, it does the choosing. 😉

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  41. SunDragonLady Choi
    04/20/2016 at 5:47 PM

    Thanks Amy, I love reading poetry too. 😉 Thanks for stopping by

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  42. Ana De Jesus
    04/20/2016 at 5:30 PM

    Difficult question to answer but I believe that love is not chosen but up to fate and when two paths cross that are meant to be it is destiny.

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  43. Amy
    04/20/2016 at 5:13 PM

    You’re a talented poet! My new-old favorite thing to do is read poetry. It’s been so long!

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  44. SunDragonLady Choi
    04/20/2016 at 1:57 PM

    Thank you David for your kind words. Truly appreciated 😉

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  45. DavidTofie
    04/20/2016 at 1:55 PM

    Emotional and so amazing. I love reading through poems, they always bring some emotion and make me think deeper. You are really good at this I must say.

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  46. SunDragonLady Choi
    04/20/2016 at 12:33 PM

    Thanks a ton, 😉

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  47. ratishagoyal
    04/20/2016 at 12:26 PM

    I haven’t read such simple yet powerful words in a long while. You write so beautiful poetry. ❤

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  48. SunDragonLady Choi
    04/20/2016 at 12:23 PM

    Thank you Katie. Who knew that a love couch could have so much depth, literally😉😉

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  49. SunDragonLady Choi
    04/20/2016 at 12:22 PM

    Of course doubly blessed, for me too, because everything is #BigInTexas 👌😉

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  50. Katie Harrington
    04/20/2016 at 11:40 AM

    Those are some powerful themes you’re dealing with there. Who knows if we can start anew with love?

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  51. KatR
    04/20/2016 at 11:35 AM

    Interesting poem. I have always enjoyed reading other’s abstract thoughts and ideas. I am very happy to connect to a fellow blogger who is also a fellow Texan! Doubly Blessed! 🙂

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  52. SunDragonLady Choi
    04/20/2016 at 10:55 AM

    Thank you Alison, thought I would add a little twist to it. Thank you for reading. 😉

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  53. Alison Bergstrom Grant
    04/20/2016 at 10:04 AM

    Beautiful poem! I was interested to see how it was going to end and it was surprising to me. I really liked that.

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  54. SunDragonLady Choi
    04/20/2016 at 10:00 AM

    Thank you Mary, for your kind words. 😉👌😆

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  55. SunDragonLady Choi
    04/20/2016 at 9:58 AM

    Hi Mary, it’s a response to my daughter who says I over think things. So Glad it clicked at the end. Thanks for reading😉👌

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  56. Mary
    04/20/2016 at 9:50 AM

    WOW. Seriously, that was really good. We need someone to put music on it. BUT it’s already beautiful as it is ❤

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  57. maryamkabir
    04/20/2016 at 9:29 AM

    I couldn’t really connect to this poem until the end. But at the end that’s where everything clicked ! My interpretation might be wrong but It makes sense to me anyways ! loved it 🙂

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  58. SunDragonLady Choi
    04/20/2016 at 8:15 AM

    lol. I have no idea. But, you are the second person to mention that. Maybe it’s a sign. I need a record deal. 😉 Thank you for reading and your kind words.

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  59. SunDragonLady Choi
    04/20/2016 at 8:11 AM

    Sometimes simple is best. Thanks for reading 😉

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  60. The AS Philosophy
    04/20/2016 at 7:54 AM

    Beautiful poem. I don’t know why but this could be the lyrics for a powerful song.

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  61. pinkklife
    04/20/2016 at 2:24 AM

    lovely poem you have used simple and sincere words ,keep going awaiting another poem to comment and ecourage

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  62. pinkklife
    04/20/2016 at 2:11 AM

    Nice poem and it contains sincere words. But in some poem you have to use simple words to reach readers

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  63. Andrea
    04/19/2016 at 10:48 PM

    Intense poem. Thanks for having the courage to share. I love the last line especially : ).

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  64. SunDragonLady Choi
    04/19/2016 at 7:37 PM

    I am not sure either, but I do like that song though. 😉 It works for me

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  65. SunDragonLady Choi
    04/19/2016 at 7:35 PM

    thanks Mollie 😉

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  66. SunDragonLady Choi
    04/19/2016 at 7:34 PM

    thanks a ton. It’s y little ode to the love couch. 😉

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  67. Mollie Collette (@MollieCollette)
    04/19/2016 at 7:18 PM

    What a great poem! Thank you so much for sharing. I cannot wait to see more!

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  68. thetravelpockets
    04/19/2016 at 7:03 PM

    I am the worst at reading and understanding poems, but this sounds so beautiful! You’re such a great writer. Keep it up!

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  69. Ty
    04/19/2016 at 1:40 AM

    Very nice. For some reason, I’m not sure why, I’m singing in my head Lauryn Hill’s Ex-Factor song as I read your poem.

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  71. jacquelineobyikocha
    10/07/2015 at 8:08 AM

    You are welcome 🙂

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  72. Ms. SunDragonLady
    10/07/2015 at 8:02 AM

    Thank you tons for reading. This course is fun, yet challenging. 😉

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  73. Ms. SunDragonLady
    10/07/2015 at 8:00 AM

    Hi Jacqueline. I thought it would be. Not sure of the direction i was going towards. Thanks fur dropping by. 😉

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  74. rosemawrites
    10/07/2015 at 4:35 AM

    You’re welcome! 😀

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  75. kingsoracle
    10/07/2015 at 3:45 AM

    Emotional! Beautifully woven words. 🙂

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  76. jacquelineobyikocha
    10/07/2015 at 2:52 AM

    Interesting pull!

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  77. Ms. SunDragonLady
    10/07/2015 at 2:34 AM

    Thank you so much for your kind encouraging words. 😉

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  78. rosemawrites
    10/07/2015 at 2:12 AM

    Oh. This poem possess powerful emotions!

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